Advent Ghosts 2024


In the spirit of the Victorian tradition of telling spooky Christmas stories, Loren Eaton’s Advent Ghosts challenges participants to write a Christmas themed scary drabble (a story of 100 words). 

The stories are posted throughout the week from the 14th to the 21st of December.

Click here to check out Loren’s site, where he has links to all the participating stories.

Now, without further ado, my story…


Preparing for the feast

A drawing in white pen on black paper. A sad little boy peers in a frost rimed window.

Chris and Jen loved the charming old bed and breakfast. They looked forward to celebrating Christmas there.

Jen screamed when she drew the curtains on their first night. “There’s a face at the window.”

Chris summoned the landlady. “There’s a little boy in the snow peering into our room,” he said.

“Oh, that’s my son,” the landlady said.

“It’s freezing outside. He’s not wearing a hat or a coat.”

“He’s not allowed in until Christmas. He knows the rules.”

“It’s only December 23rd,” Jen said.

The landlady nodded. “He has to fast for advent, but come the 25th, he feasts.”


I hope you enjoyed this story. Be sure to check out the other Advent Ghosts stories linked on Loren’s website above.

The above artwork is by me.

I can’t believe this is my 6th year participating! Thank you so much to Rhonda Parrish for letting me know about Advent Ghosts, and a special thank you to Loren Eaton for organizing it every year.

If you want to check out my stories from past years, here they are: 2023, 2022, 2021, 2020, 2019.

10 responses to “Advent Ghosts 2024”

  1. Valinora Troy Avatar

    Great story! I re-read the other years and enjoyed every single one immensely! Well done!!

    1. Iseult Avatar
      Iseult

      Thank you, Valinora! I re-read them and enjoyed them too!

  2. Loren Eaton Avatar

    The real question is, “What exactly will he be feasting on?” Methinks Chris and Jen have some reason to be concerned.

    1. Iseult Avatar
      Iseult

      I think Chris and Jen might be Christmas dinner! Thanks, Loren.

  3. Kel Mansfield Avatar

    Nice one, Mr Murphy.
    Thank you and Merry Christmas.

    1. Iseult Avatar
      Iseult

      Thank you, Kel! Merry Christmas to you too.

  4. Dave Higgins Avatar

    Superb ending; just the right level of implication.

    1. Iseult Avatar
      Iseult

      Thank you, Dave!

    1. Iseult Avatar
      Iseult

      Thank you, Linda.

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